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Finally it's finished! :phew: :XD:
Well, what can I say... I LOVE my colored pencils. :XD: Lol, seriously, there's not much to say... I'm still practicing on drawing perspective-ness , but I'm very pleased with the final result.
BTW, ignore the stupid background... >.>''

I'LL ACCEPT CRITIQUES. D8
... but please be gentle. ^^


Media used: B pencil (for the sketch), black pen, colored pencils, Photoshop (for the border and Earth Kingdom symbol).

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Work in progress: [link]
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Suki © Mike DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko
Art © =tugaMaggie

Critiques


:iconquikshadow:
Nicely done. You do beautiful works when you turn to traditional line art and colouring.

The pose is nicely drawn and you've grasped perspective pretty well.

Details have been paid attention to like the holes within the fans to the curling of the fabric at the wrist. As well as the colouring of the fans and headband.

The line art is drawn very well. However, the thick line between the should pad and the face seems out of place. The breastplate also seems a little flat instead of popping out in a 3D perspective way.

Its also a little hard to tell where the light is coming from. I assume from the front or above. The colouring is great, though the fans' shine and colour needs a smoother transition to give a better effect of its shiny hardness.

You've captured the Kyoshi Warrior well. Its a nice and well drawn picture with the expression, pose and details. You've defiantly grown as an artist since I started to watch you.

I look forward to more ATLA fanart and more traditional or tablet line art from you! :D
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:iconajcmetallica:
I like it! The colours are very well done and pretty much spot-on in terms of the colours from the show and I don't think there's any problem with your perspective either.

The only nit-picky thing I can really notice (and this is REALLY nit-picky) is that the cross thing on her forehead protector isn't in the centre. Yah... Very nit-picky!

Faved for awesomeness! ^_^

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*Currently looking for someone to play Res 5 on PS3 (Someone who isn't so good that I'll suck by comparison, but who's good enough to not die more often than not)*

Your World Looks Cooler In Slow Motion!

"No More Coco-Moo! >_<"
:iconzoephantom2795:
WOW, it{s great, I like the way you colored it, it looks so...real. I'll fave it! You're great, it's perfect!
:iconsarcasticleaves:
AWESOME! :faint: I love the coloring! :D This is fantastic! Great perspective!
:iconvampirepenguin93:
The foreshortening is quite well done!
Very nice work!

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:iconedniz:
Wow, it is really awesome! :heart:
:iconsharpie91:
Amazing! :D You're really getting good at using colored pencils! ;)

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Fairy Tales are more than true: not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten. ~G.K. Chesterton
:iconxwhite-lotusx:
This is so freaking awesome!!
:iconsolemnsally:
Wow! Great job with the coloring of the gold and the foreshortening. Nice work!

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"for beautiful eyes, look for the good in others
for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness
and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.”
-audrey hepburn.
:iconufd:
I like Sukki. She kicks major butt.

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Sam: no matter how this thing ends...this whole ride we've been on together... I wouldn't change it for the world. Not one bit.
Danny: Me neither. I...
Sam: (kisses Danny's cheek)
Danny: (kisses Sam's lips) Wow. Remind me to save the world more often.
:iconavatarded99:
Filled with pure awesomeness! :love:

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"I wished to fold the laws of nature, the dignity of life, and the expression of affection into my work." -- Master Akira Yoshizawa

Never underestimate the power of paper. :heart:

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