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Finally it's finished!
Well, what can I say... I LOVE my colored pencils. BTW, ignore the stupid background... >.>'' I'LL ACCEPT CRITIQUES. D8 ... but please be gentle. ^^ Media used: B pencil (for the sketch), black pen, colored pencils, Photoshop (for the border and Earth Kingdom symbol). EDIT Work in progress: [link] /EDIT Suki © Mike DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko Art © =tugaMaggie Comments
I like it! The colours are very well done and pretty much spot-on in terms of the colours from the show and I don't think there's any problem with your perspective either.
The only nit-picky thing I can really notice (and this is REALLY nit-picky) is that the cross thing on her forehead protector isn't in the centre. Yah... Very nit-picky! Faved for awesomeness! ^_^ -- *Currently looking for someone to play Res 5 on PS3 (Someone who isn't so good that I'll suck by comparison, but who's good enough to not die more often than not)* Your World Looks Cooler In Slow Motion! "No More Coco-Moo! >_<" |
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Critiques
The pose is nicely drawn and you've grasped perspective pretty well.
Details have been paid attention to like the holes within the fans to the curling of the fabric at the wrist. As well as the colouring of the fans and headband.
The line art is drawn very well. However, the thick line between the should pad and the face seems out of place. The breastplate also seems a little flat instead of popping out in a 3D perspective way.
Its also a little hard to tell where the light is coming from. I assume from the front or above. The colouring is great, though the fans' shine and colour needs a smoother transition to give a better effect of its shiny hardness.
You've captured the Kyoshi Warrior well. Its a nice and well drawn picture with the expression, pose and details. You've defiantly grown as an artist since I started to watch you.
I look forward to more ATLA fanart and more traditional or tablet line art from you!
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